A Long Day in Lychford

This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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Lychford's apprentice witch (not that anyone knows that), and owner of Witches, a magic shop (not that many take it seriously), Autumn has had a bad day. So bad, that a police officer has dropped by the next morning to interrupt an impending hangover with questions about it. She had a fight with her teacher and employee that left both fuming and ready to consider ending the relationships, and then she went to a bar not-really-looking for a fight, but ready for it when it showed up.

But when you're one of three women responsible for protecting the borders between our world and the rest, and you're pretty magic-capable, your bad days can have pretty catastrophic consequences. Without getting into the details, she messes up the borders, the protections – the magic that keeps all the things and people and whatevers out of our world that we're not equipped to deal with (in any sense).

Meanwhile, Judith is dealing with the aftermath of the fight with Autumn in her own way. Which boils down to being crankier than usual, and then dealing with the fallout from Autumn's error. Judith is primarily concerned with problems that the other two aren't aware of and have little do to with magic. There were a line or two that I think were supposed to be spooky or creepy in her POV sections that really were just sad (my guess is that Cornell wrote them to work on both levels, but they really only served as the latter for me).

Lizzie got put on the backburner for the most part in this book – not that she's absent, but she doesn't have that much to do. Which is fine – she can't be the center of each entry in this series, but I'd have preferred to have seen a bit more from her. I enjoyed the references to Lizzie's Fitbit, it was nice to have just the hint of lightness in this otherwise grim story. Actually, the other thing that came close to fun in this book also came from Lizzie's POV. She's not the typical source for that, and it's nice to see that she's capable of it.

I wish these were longer – I know it's supposed to be a series of novellas, but this one in particular makes me want for more – more development, more plot, more character interaction. I don't think I noticed it as much in the previous installments, so maybe it's something about this one. Still, this is a good story and time spent in Lychford is always rewarding.

In the end, this served primarily to set the stage for Witches of Lychford #4 – and maybe more. Yes, the story was interesting, and it was good to have this look at Autumn, and the whole Brexit tie-in was interesting, but this just didn't work for me quite the way the others did. I have high hopes for the next, it's not like I'm done with this or anything, I just wanted more.