Entangled

Entangled

2012 • 46 pages

Ratings2

Average rating3.5

15

Altogether the story was quite sweet and the smexy scene was good, but the trouble with short stories is that they tend to seem more like the draft of a longer story that has yet to come.

It was a bit irritating that Daren, after having been in love with his best friend for such a long time, doesn't really listen to him when Taylor tells him his past, although he seems to care deeply for him. Sure, it's distracting when your crush sits half naked just a few meters away from you, but now Daren appeaes as if he's only interested in Taylor's body.

October 27, 2013