Heat It Up

Heat It Up

2010 • 78 pages

Ratings3

Average rating3.7

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3.5Here comes a dissenting opinion and for reasons that are entirely my own. Overall I liked the story and I think it works pretty well in the Out of Uniform universe. [a:Greg Boudreaux 15087355 Greg Boudreaux https://s.gr-assets.com/assets/nophoto/user/u_50x66-632230dc9882b4352d753eedf9396530.png] a.k.a. [a:Greg Tremblay 8108759 Greg Tremblay https://images.gr-assets.com/authors/1484561919p2/8108759.jpg] does his usual fantastic job and was a good choice for these two men. Dustin is a sweet Thor and Wes is a prickly pear. They fit. Wes and Dustin are well matched as a couple and overall I liked their dynamics, how they flip the expected roles, however this is where my personal BS kicks in (but this is my review/opinion/or note to self about my reading experience). When it comes to the bedroom this couple has a BDSM relationship, a lite one for sure, some nipple play, a touch of restraints, talk of orgasm denial, and a bit of begging. That's fine. I have no problem with it at all. My issues are I read BDSM usually as a challenge to myself. While, intellectually, I understand the power exchanges, roles, and what each party gets out of it, my public defender self is always looking out for the s in a D/s relationship and here I wasn't fully convinced that Wes had earned the right to boss Dustin around, no matter how much that cranked Dustin up. Perhaps the problem was that the trust earning/getting to know you phase happened off-page. The book opens with these two meeting in person after a spell of having an on-line relationship via an app and maybe that would've assuaged my conscience. and probably the fact that almost every encounter, perhaps out of necessity, is sex related. Some out-of-the-bedroom breathing room would've been welcome. I hope the two ensuing shorts remedy that. I enjoyed the rest of the story, visiting briefly with previous couples, the bureaucracy of the Army etc. and as usual, at the heart of this series, are loving caring families. Btw are there really people as nosy as Curly? Damn.

August 20, 2020