I'll Never Let You Go

A few bits bothered me. Timing, consistency and such. Very tiny things with the villian and POV's. Sometimes it seemed like she forgot whose POV it was or would just start a POV of a different character randomly who never had one before.
Not anything that bothered me too much, but I just really noticed. ALSO, how she constantly talked about the body of the FL. Her breasts straining against her shirt, her bouncy breast and so forth... and dude... these bitches be pale. Creamy white skin. All of them. Creamy white.