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This story had so much potential, I wanted it go a little deeper. For example, Why was writing down the prayer wrong? Or more about the details and (potential) problems of leading of a city by a female taking on a typically male role.
The art was problematic, it was occasionally hard to tell who was who, and the blending of drawn scenery with pictures of real objects was crude (there was a night scene where the moon and its gleam where digitally placed on a drawn landscape, not done well).
Additionally, this was labeled as historical fiction, but it was hard for me to get a sense of time. All I understood was that it was ‘before the Egyptians'.