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Infinity Loop

Infinity Loop: A Time Traveling Adventure Harem

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15

Hmmm... An ok start to the series.
The plot is intriguing, but the whining & silliness of MC made the first half of the book not so interesting. The ending was good though, it should have handled better.

Thing is, the author should note the below plot holes and fix them in the second book, or else it's not going to be successful.

1. MC should not whine like little boy/girl, he should show some maturity.

2. He doesn't have any skills, and the author should focus on his character development more.

3. It is wonderful, that you have chosen a nice place for time travel, but you should have explored more. I hope this happens in book 2.

Overall an okayish read, let's see how it goes in the second book.

November 19, 2018Report this review