Iron Flame

Not Rebecca literally making deaths not applicable to any future plots lmao. I bet Varrish is alive

Not Xaden being a carbon copy and acting E X A C T L Y like a certain Dark Prince from Blood and Ash.

I have a feeling all of Xadens letters will be republished into a special edition only copy. If that doesn't happen I'll genuinely be shocked.

Characters introduced and for what? Not like we know much about them. Not when every character or plot building scene is ended abruptly just to cut a few days ahead or even a week or two ahead to force Violet and Xaden scenes.

So many grammatical errors and syntax issues.

This is presumably book two out of five, and along with that I've heard rumors Rebecca was rushed to edit this plot down to put it into one book vs two. I feel like I only ever hear that excuse when it comes to a disappointing book release. Your publishing sucked for this release, bookstore owners are bashing the copies they received and having to send copies back, Amazon & others over promised copies and canceled pre orders, cancelling the opening day parties at some locations, too many people have received completely damaged pre orders and then to TOP that, a not great follow up of a reading experiencing. I'd create whatever excuse I could too to lessen the criticism but overall this whole thing is a giant Yikes.