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Mountains and Magic

Mountains and Magic

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15

I thought I was going to like this one, but in the end was pretty disappointed.

The writing is a notch up from the crappy paranormal cozy I read a couple days ago, but that doesn't say much considering the last one's author writes like she barely reads any books. This one is ok. But the book is rambling, there are scenes that suddenly transition into another scene rather suddenly, and it's also repetitive. I feel like she writes scenes in different order or something before stitching them together linearly, because there will be times where a character asks the MC something that the MC has ALREADY TOLD THEM previously. “Why do you care about Talyn so much?” is a question that was asked like twenty freaking times.

Also, I knew who was the killer as soon as the character was introduced.....

December 3, 2018