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Of Course I Try

2010 • 16 pages

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I don't read much short stories and I've never read erotica before but I have to say that this was an excellently written story and I completely enjoyed it. The author's writing style is beautiful and the story, from a very eye opening beginning, had me glued to the pages until the very end. Jocelyn, the main character, can't seem to stop loving (lusting?) Max no matter how hard she tries because every time she leaves she keeps coming back and although I could perfectly see why she kept coming back (the man has talent ;)) I also wanted to know the mystery behind her and Max's relationship and more importantly Max himself. Knowing this was a paranormal even before I won this ebook from Aine's Realm I was curious to find out what the paranormal was because I could definitely see traces of it but never figured it out until it was revealed and I loved that because too many times I have read stories where I completely figured out they mystery before the main character and then its just frustrating to wait for the MC to catch up. Maybe the short story had a hand on me not catching on sooner, or maybe the author is really just that great at not laying all the cards out on the table, or maybe its both but I will say that I will be keeping an eye out for more of Seleste deLaney's work and hope that maybe there is a full-length novel in the future for me to read.

September 14, 2010Report this review