Shreiber and Tome: Unlucky Vamps

3.5 / 5 - I had a lot of fun with the characters (both with the protagonists as well as the supporting cast) and their interactions. The world they live in feels plausible, vampires, wizards, angels & demons included.
The storyline felt a bit forced towards the end, but overall - especially considering that this is a debut novel - I didn't have many problems with it.
I found the sheer number of typos and grammar glitches quite distracting, though (otherwise I would have given it solid 4/5), and I think the story would benefit a lot from a more thorough proof-reading,
even if (or especially because) this is a debut, and a freebie on Smashwords.
As it is, I am reluctant to buy the next book in the series, even though I think I might enjoy more stories about Shreiber, Tome & Co.