The Bachelor's Valet

The Bachelor's Valet

2021 • 236 pages

Ratings3

Average rating3.7

15

Format read: ebook (Kindle Unlimited)
Reading time: 3h
Tags: fantasy, lgbt (m/m, f/f), historical
Own a copy: no
Reread likelihood: 7/10

This was a very cute and heartwarming novella! I always go into KU books with low expectations (I'm sorry, but experience tells me that there's lots of drivel to run through on KU before you find something good), so I was happy to find that this little book was well written and entertaining.

There were a few things that lowered the rating, namely the exaggerated 1930s language (one too many “old boy” and “old thing” to make it bearable, I'm afraid) and the odd way of ending direct speeches with “what” (which, in retrospect, seemed to be a strange mannerism afforded to Alphonse specifically). I also felt a bit jarred by the inclusion of magic seemingly out of nowhere at first (and never fully explained), but towards the end it made much more sense for the plot. I just wish there would have been a proper introduction to the subject before throwing us into what seems at first glance a non-magical historical fiction.

The romances were sweet, although the Aaliyah/Jasmine pairing didn't have much ‘screen time' compared to Alphonse/Jacobi. I liked all the characters well enough, but I wish Jasmine had been present for more than just two scenes. I get that the focus was on Alphonse and his discovery of himself/his feelings, but the girls also had an interesting story.

All in all, this was a fun, quick-paced read that made my train commute much more bearable than usual. Despite my nitpicking, I still enjoyed this very much, and I'd probably reread it at some point when I'm need of a sugary dose of heartwarming goodness.

October 14, 2022