The Camelot Betrayal

I thoroughly enjoyed The Camelot Betrayal!

Many of the things that bothered me about the first book, The Guinevere Deception, were improved in this one. Primarily, this one didn't just feel like a summary of a story. There was more showing instead of telling, which helps the reader connect to the characters and story exponentially. I hadn't realized how many odd time-jumps and quick lists of everything Guinevere did in the day there were in The Guinevere Deception until I could compare it to this book. It made it easier to be in the book, as well as a more pleasant read.

We also get to know the characters and their relationships a lot better. I love Guinevere and Lancelot's relationship, and it developed so well through the book. I understand why they trust each other, why they are friends. The same with Brangien and Dindrane. And Mordred. The only relationship I feel isn't truly developed is Arthur and Guinevere. I think there's too much reliance on the fact that it's a given they're together because, you know, legend, and not enough showing. Guinevere mentions (a lot) that she felt like she knew Arthur the moment they met, but as the reader, we don't have that magical connection. I know I should like Arthur, but he's just....bland. He's somehow the least interesting character in the entire book.

I think the plot was also better paced in The Camelot Betrayal than The Guinevere Deception. There's still a lot going on, but it's not quite as overwhelming. However, Guinevere's internal monologue was a bit repetitive. I get that she's anguishing over the things she did and trying to figure out who she is, but I started skipping the paragraphs where Guinevere just listed every bad thing she thought she'd done.

Overall, though, The Camelot Betrayal was an enjoyable read that kept me turning the pages. I'm already looking forward to the next book in the series!

Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for providing this ARC in exchange for an honest review.