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The Cyborg He Brought Home

The Cyborg He Brought Home

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Somewhere between 3 and 4 stars. This is an erotic short story in which a mage and a cyborg meet and have sex. I really liked the crisp writing style, as well as the original concept of tattoos that channel and/or enhance magic.

The mage is the PoV character; he's a cis gay man. The cyborg is a trans man, and the mage has a minor freakout when he discovers this.

I know this is just my own perspective, but I find it hard to relate to a character who reacts like the mage does here. His reaction is not terrible; he's really just hesitant, at first. But since there is not a lot of development of either character, nor a real plot, there isn't much else to focus on.The sex scene is hot. I especially liked the telepathy moment.

Overall: not bad.

November 8, 2016