The Dragon's Path

This would probably get 4 stars from me, but there was something bothering through the whole book. Sometimes it obvious that it was the author's intent, especially in the dialog, but other times it could just been a mistake. Many pronouns, articles, and other connecting words didn't make it to the page (like in my previous two sentences.) All those “nothing” and “unnecessary” words that make a sentence flow. It ruined the rhythm of the book for me. It's hard to enjoy a fantasy when you're constantly being dragged back to reality by the words on the page. I'll try the next one and hope it was just an editing mistake that's not repeated.