The Night Cyclist

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This is a Tor.com original short-story. Unlike most Tor.com Originals, this is a complete story rather than a prequel or cryptic glimpse into a world that the author has fleshed out in a novel or series. This story works well as a short story, having a beginning, middle and end.

The narrator is a bicyclist getting old and feeling alienated from his life and the world, He rides his bike home at nights, though the dark, to his lonely apartment, avoiding the malicious booby-traps left by small-minded pedestrians. One night he spots two dead bodies floating in the river. Watching the news, he intuits a detail about the killer. The next night he is in the race of his life with the “night cyclist” clad in pure black.

I was conflicted by this book. It is technically proficient and the writing is good, but the character of the narrator left me unaffected. For example, the narrator sees the bodies but does nothing about them, presumably because he doesn't want to get involved. Then, there is his interactions with the demonic cyclist, and the easy way he deals with the problem that closes the book.

I just didn't get a sense of the character's motivation, except that he was not someone I could identify with, or care to identify with. On top of that, I didn't find the inside game of being a cyclist particularly interesting.

Of course, your mileage may vary.

Merged review:

Please give me a helpful vote on Amazon - https://www.amazon.com/review/R2VFO2ALEB6MEC/ref=cm_cr_rdp_perm

This is a Tor.com original short-story. Unlike most Tor.com Originals, this is a complete story rather than a prequel or cryptic glimpse into a world that the author has fleshed out in a novel or series. This story works well as a short story, having a beginning, middle and end.

The narrator is a bicyclist getting old and feeling alienated from his life and the world, He rides his bike home at nights, though the dark, to his lonely apartment, avoiding the malicious booby-traps left by small-minded pedestrians. One night he spots two dead bodies floating in the river. Watching the news, he intuits a detail about the killer. The next night he is in the race of his life with the “night cyclist” clad in pure black.

I was conflicted by this book. It is technically proficient and the writing is good, but the character of the narrator left me unaffected. For example, the narrator sees the bodies but does nothing about them, presumably because he doesn't want to get involved. Then, there is his interactions with the demonic cyclist, and the easy way he deals with the problem that closes the book.

I just didn't get a sense of the character's motivation, except that he was not someone I could identify with, or care to identify with. On top of that, I didn't find the inside game of being a cyclist particularly interesting.

Of course, your mileage may vary.