When the Moon Hatched

Well, I have many conflicting thoughts about this book, but mostly negative unfortunate... I'm not supposed to get the whole plot less than 200 pages in on a novel of 700 pages. Something is not right!

This was sold to me as a wonderful mix of fantasy and romance, told through beautiful purple prose. It has all of this, it just didn't feel well executed for me:
- Wordbuiling was very very lazy: Dae instead of Day, slumber instead of night (“who disturbs my Slumber?”