Whisper of Iron: A LitRPG Crafting Fantasy

Whisper of Iron: A LitRPG Crafting Fantasy

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Average rating1.8

15

I found this story difficult to engage with due to its noticeable gaps and underdeveloped world-building. The narrative lacks the depth and clarity needed to fully draw readers into its universe, leaving much to be desired in terms of immersion and coherence. Despite its promising premise, the story requires significant refinement to meet its potential.

February 4, 2024