Lilith K Duat

While the book is actually well written, with good imagery, I felt nothing for the characters. Enoch needed more than chiseled cheekbones to be appealing.

There was absolutely no build up to their attraction. Enoch just sort of says what he's going to do to her body the first instant they meet. He comes across as an incel.

I gave up when he broke her legs and said "Look what you made me do".

I'm so disappointed.
I loved the sexy premise of this story, where a young lady listens to her neighbor have kinky sex with nameless women and lets her mind and fingers run wild.

Then randomly there's a lackluster foursome with either badly described or flat out impossible body positions.

I'll show you.

Daniels laid down beside me and pulled me on top of him, inserting himself back inside from below. ...Daniels pounded me from below.

Daniels pulled out once again and started rubbing the tip of his cock against my asshole....Relaxed. the tip of him entered me. I looked to see James[approaching].

James cock stretched my already used pussy to its limits as he entered me... Daniels and James started fucking me in tandem. their cocks meeting through my walls on the inside.

say that

It only said her orgasm was building.

I was given a copy by the author in exchange for an honest review

I enjoyed this book. The sex scenes were really hot, and playful and respectful. There was a lot of love and understanding. It had this Hippie Free-Love vibe too it, which was fun and I hadn't encountered that before in my erotica reads. Also, a guy gives a chick oral and his tongue is pierced. That is always fun. Also, sleep-groping.

However, what initially drew me to this story was the premise. The world is a zombie infested nightmare and three survivors are trapped together. Unfortunately the story barely touches on that. The zombies could have been anything: A mudslide, a blizzard. If you're going to select an unrealistic premise, no matter what you write, erotica or not, commit to it. We're writers, we can write anything! Indulge!

For example, Isadora is married to Jacob but their best friend Samuel is also living with them because zombies. Sometimes the horde moves on and the survivors can do things like collect river water and firewood. Maybe Sam went out to hunt or something and almost gets bit, there's a scare, and it helps Issy and Sam realize how much they want each other and should take advantage of the time they have together and that sparks all the wild threesome sex.

It was good, I liked it, but I see potential for more which I hope the author will take advantage of.