Rosanne
"You ask us to wake,When we want you to sleep,Secrets are meant,For one soul to keep."
This book was a fun read. It was not especially good, magical or original, but I enjoyed reading it. Why do I only give it two stars, you might ask. Even though the story has real potential and the character are interesting, there were a few elements that stopped me from giving this book a higher score.
Sometimes the author crossed the line between sassy and vulgar language. I will not go into detail here, but let's just say I would've been happy with a bit more nuance๐I mean, I like reading a bit of smut, but it needs to be written well for it not to make me cringe. One other thing that really bothered me, is the way Temper and Callie talk to each other. I've never heard friends call each other 'bitch' so many times, and I'm not here for it. Why would you even say that to a friend? I don't get it.
"And mountains may rise and fall, and the sun might wither away, and the sea claim the land and swallow the sky. But you will always be mine. And the stars might fall from the heavens, and night might cloak the earth, but until the darkness dies, I will always be yours."
The Bargainer might just be a long lost Illyrian cousin of Sarah J. Maas's bat boys, with his shadows, huge wingspan and possessive growling. A siren as main character is a great idea, a strong woman with magical abilities who learns that sharing your sorrows is not always a bad thing. Callypso would make the worst roommate, leaving sand all over the house, but I liked her. Her relationship with the Bargainer is a bit confusing at times, but they do fit together. But then, with only 30 pages to go, I had to laugh so hard at Callies stupidity. After her abduction, she's been trapped in a prison cave with other women for over 2 chapters, and it takes her all that time to figure out who the villain is. How? How is it possible for her to take that long to connect the dots??๐ I thought she knew immediately who was behind the abductions, but no, the author made it sound like a clever discovery. If there's one thing I'm allergic to in books, it's making logical thinking sound like the brilliant ideas of a mastermind. It's the main reason why I'm never touching another book by Dan Brown again. So for me, to experience this so close to finishing the book, it was a bit disappointing. I don't think I'm going to read the second book in this series, mainly because I feel like I can already predict what's going to happen.
But don't let my review keep you from reading this book yourself! It was just not what I hoped, but that might be different for somebody else ๐ if this is on your TBR, you should give it a go๐๐ผ
"You ask us to wake,When we want you to sleep,Secrets are meant,For one soul to keep."
This book was a fun read. It was not especially good, magical or original, but I enjoyed reading it. Why do I only give it two stars, you might ask. Even though the story has real potential and the character are interesting, there were a few elements that stopped me from giving this book a higher score.
Sometimes the author crossed the line between sassy and vulgar language. I will not go into detail here, but let's just say I would've been happy with a bit more nuance๐I mean, I like reading a bit of smut, but it needs to be written well for it not to make me cringe. One other thing that really bothered me, is the way Temper and Callie talk to each other. I've never heard friends call each other 'bitch' so many times, and I'm not here for it. Why would you even say that to a friend? I don't get it.
"And mountains may rise and fall, and the sun might wither away, and the sea claim the land and swallow the sky. But you will always be mine. And the stars might fall from the heavens, and night might cloak the earth, but until the darkness dies, I will always be yours."
The Bargainer might just be a long lost Illyrian cousin of Sarah J. Maas's bat boys, with his shadows, huge wingspan and possessive growling. A siren as main character is a great idea, a strong woman with magical abilities who learns that sharing your sorrows is not always a bad thing. Callypso would make the worst roommate, leaving sand all over the house, but I liked her. Her relationship with the Bargainer is a bit confusing at times, but they do fit together. But then, with only 30 pages to go, I had to laugh so hard at Callies stupidity. After her abduction, she's been trapped in a prison cave with other women for over 2 chapters, and it takes her all that time to figure out who the villain is. How? How is it possible for her to take that long to connect the dots??๐ I thought she knew immediately who was behind the abductions, but no, the author made it sound like a clever discovery. If there's one thing I'm allergic to in books, it's making logical thinking sound like the brilliant ideas of a mastermind. It's the main reason why I'm never touching another book by Dan Brown again. So for me, to experience this so close to finishing the book, it was a bit disappointing. I don't think I'm going to read the second book in this series, mainly because I feel like I can already predict what's going to happen.
But don't let my review keep you from reading this book yourself! It was just not what I hoped, but that might be different for somebody else ๐ if this is on your TBR, you should give it a go๐๐ผ