15 Minutes
15 Minutes
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1 primary bookThe Rewind Agency/Conspiracy is a 1-book series first released in 2013 with contributions by Jill Cooper.
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Why?
Let's play a rousing round of ‘I don't think that word means what you think that word means'!
I throttle her back, and she crumbles to the pavement.
According to my dictionary, ‘throttle' means to choke; strangle or to censor or suppress or to slow by means of a throttle. So...she strangled her mothers back? Leaving the idea aside that I believe to choke or strangle something you have to have oxygen or fuel passing through what you're ‘throttling' - how long would her arms have to be to throttle her mothers back? (Why not just use ‘grab' or ‘lunge to'?)
The throbbing will not abide, and something inside me is desperate to come out.
Abide, huh? You mean: to remain, or to await, to put up with? So, the throbbing will not remain? Or, perhaps, the throbbing will not put up with? (Abate, I think is the word that is meant to be here.)
His face is soft and understanding, but I want to wretch all over his fine pressed suit.
So she wants ‘to a miserable or unhappy person all over all over his fine pressed suit'? Or maybe that's she want's ‘to a despised person all over his fine pressed suit.' (Perhaps retch? Sure, saying it sounds the same, but the meanings are very different.)
My stomach wretches with a convulsion, and before I know it, I'm on my knees, and flashes of white mar my vision.
See previous. (I'm thinking the word that's wanted here might be ‘wrench'.)
I've never been surrounded by expensive antiques before.
So...she's been surrounded by cheap antiques?
Twisting on my arches, I stare at him, but he won't look at me.
? What did she do, leave the rest of her feet behind?
Beyond the need of an editor, I kind of hate Lara.
There he is with his arm swung around my shoulder and a dumb grin on his face. Like he loves me. Like he thinks he owns me.
I'm all for independent girls that take no crap from guys, but where the hell does she get that conclusion from?
“I think I'm special.
Of course you do. -.-
Did I save her so she could go to work? Earn money? No, I saved her for me. Yes, that's selfish. But. I. Don't. Care.
Stupid, too.