A Quest of Heroes

Too simplistic of a writing style for me and the characters were poorly developed. The introduction to the kingdom alone made me cringe. Everyone was too perfectly happy. Don't write that things were perfect, put some challenges in there outside of a cranky neighboring nation, it's been done way too many times. And seriously, a sword in a stone? Cliché. I gave this two stars because the writer does have some talent, and I think with some work this novel could have turned out a lot better.