A Strange and Stubborn Endurance

Definitely more of a 4.5, so I'm rounding up.

CW: rape, suicidal ideation, self harm, animal murder

I've been eager to get to this book since the first time I got to know about it because I was sure it'll be special. I'm also very thankful to the author for offering me an arc before I managed to snag an audio review copy too and I had such a good time alternating between the two formats. So I guess you can see which direction this review is gonna go.

Just before this book, I had started reading another arc but it wasn't able to keep my attention. So I put it down and picked this one up hoping that this would be more interesting, and I was instantly hooked. It does start off with a difficult scene but I have to commend the author for handling the aftermath with a lot of empathy. And also for providing the content warnings, because if I encounter a suicide/self harm scene without knowing, it's an instant DNF from me and my mood will be totally down for days to come later. But I knew it was coming and that made it easier to get through, and I just felt so so sympathetic towards the character. The writing is just very engaging right from the get go and the pacing pretty fast that I didn't wanna put it down once I began. If it wasn't for my dear friend Shazzie asking me to slow down coz I had promised to do a buddy read (which wasn't entirely successful because of my over enthusiasm), I would have probably finished this in a day. I thought the endearing writing was equally complemented by a very well narrated audiobook, with both James Fouhey and Vikas Adam bringing the characters and their emotions to life with their spectacular voice acting.

Velasin or Vel is a gay man from a kingdom which is both homophobic and transphobic, and finds himself both in an arranged diplomatic marriage and a scandalous situation back to back. And then follows his journey, both physical and within himself, to find the place and person where he can belong and finally be himself, not having to hide his true self. While his anxiety, constant spiraling, and self deprecation felt very relatable, it was the other side of his personality that impressed me. He is inquisitive, a keen observer, a born charmer and diplomat who is quite capable of figuring out malicious intentions and motives and investigate political conflicts. But he is also lost when he realizes that he doesn't have to hide his self anymore, can be open in his affections, and needs time to unlearn all the prejudices among which he grew up.

Caethari or Cae on the other hand is a lord's son and soldier, who is shocked at his sudden arrange marriage instead of his sister's but is also curious to meet his prospective husband. He is a much more straightforward person who doesn't fancy himself capable of handling any political intrigue, and also can get shy around the person whom he finds attractive. But overall he is just a very nice and thoughtful guy.

And the way their budding relationship is written despite it beginning with a marriage, is hands down the best part of this book. Right from Cae trying to help Vel through his trauma and offering his friendship, to Vel taking it upon himself to investigate all the assassination attempts and trusting Cae implicitly, their bond starts with friendship and builds into something more, full of trust and affection. They are just so endearingly written that I found myself helpless but to fall in love with both of them, and root for them every step of the way.

Vel's friend and valet Markel is also a significant presence in the book and I adored their bond. They have a history and the trust between them is inviolable, and I felt they got to express their feelings towards each other even more now that they are allowed to. And it was amazing how Cae made an effort to learn sign language so that he could get to know his husband's best friend better. Liran is Car's ex and current friend who I thought was a delight even though he was only present for a couple of scenes. I just had this feeling that he and Vel would get along very well and tease Cae incessantly. There were also many of Cae's family members and other people in his household who were all quite interesting and accepted Velasin pretty quickly which made me like them all.

To conclude, I'm absolutely in love with this book. It may have some difficult themes but they are handled sensitively, and along with them we have very easy to love characters, writing that's engaging since page one, a very charming love story, maybe a bit predictable but still enjoyable mystery and political intrigue, and just overall a very lovely reading experience. I'll especially recommend this to fans of Winter's Orbit because it has very similar vibes, albeit in a fantasy setting. Also do give the audiobook a try because it's excellent. I can't believe this is the first book of Foz I'm reading despite following them for a long while, and can only hope I'll get to read more of their works.

I, like everyone else, read the back cover and thought, “wow, this sounds right up my alley! What is there not to love about a queer historical fantasy with an arranged marriage trope.” However, two sentences in, and I knew right away that nope, this was not going to work. The author uses so many adjectives and adverbs in each sentence, it's dizzying. Not only that, but the attempt to sound ‘old timey' doesn't work here at all because 1) some of the words make no sense contextually, 2) the sentence structure is off putting for the most part, and 3) old literature doesn't even sound like this, not by any stretch of the imagination.

The offending opening lines in question:

“We'd scarcely entered Father's new lands when I realised how little I cared that I'd never inherit them. It was a genteel epiphany, as such things go...”

Let's dissect this a bit:
Epiphany: noun A moment of sudden revelation or insight.

The word used to enhance the noun:
Genteel: adj. Polite, refined, or respectable, often in an affected or ostentatious way.

A much better word to use that was forgone to sound (incorrectly) ‘old timey':
Gentle: adj. Moderate in action, effect, or degree; not harsh or severe.

Now, everyone, please tell me, is it truly a refined moment of revelation, or is it not more a soft revelation? Which one do you think makes more sense? Case in point.


Naturally, I didn't stop at the first few lines. No, I flipped around the book at random to see if maybe the first page was just an unfortunate editing slip-up. Alas, it was not an accidental slip-up. The whole book is like this, and as a self-respecting reader, there's no way I can stomach 544 pages of this kind of writing.

Consider these few choice examples I picked up during my flip through:

“...her head was freshly shaven enough to gleam beneath its stubble.”
Excuse me, but this is an oxymoron.

“Cae manfully resisted the urge to squirm away from the question...”
Manfully? Really? How does one resist in a manly way, exactly? Is the author playing synonym roulette here or something, because some alternative word choices in the dictionary are ‘ordinary' words like ‘bravely' and ‘courageously' (which still doesn't make sense in the context, but at least they are infinitely less painful to read than ‘manfully.')

“Being fifteen is four parts bravery to six parts foolishness...”
15 = 4+6... yes
insert confused Jackie Chan meme
Who talks like this? Do you know anyone who naturally comes up with this kind of response in a conversation?

Cae felt an obscure pang.
..... a what not? What, pray tell, is an obscure pang, exactly?


I could keep going, but I need a Tylenol at this point. Wherefore art thou so headache-inducing, dear novel?

I really enjoyed this. Lovely romance especially since I love seeing healthy romances. 

However. I have to say that plot wise it could have been more clever. There's comparisons of two different cultures one that forbids lgbtq folks' existence and the other that embraces. 
The good part about this other culture that is, Tithenai's culture, lots of diversity lots, more emotionally healthy folks, freedom of expression etc. 

My dissatisfaction comes with the political aspect. The system is still hierarchical. There isn't much light shed on how freedom of expression would work alongside with governance in a system where ranks and orders still exist and I feel like a very fun opportunity for something that could have been cleverly crafted was missed. Yes there's the sequel but considering the plot of this book I was left quite disappointed at the final reveal.