Better off Dead by Lee Child and Andrew Child

#1 NEW YORK TIMES BESTSELLER • THE BLOCKBUSTER JACK REACHER SERIES THAT INSPIRED TWO MAJOR MOTION PICTURES AND THE STREAMING SERIES REACHER Digging graves had not been part of my plans when I woke up that morning. Reacher goes where he wants, when he wants. That morning he was heading west, walking under the merciless desert sun—until he comes upon a curious scene. A Jeep has crashed into the only tree for miles around. A woman is slumped over the wheel. Dead? No, nothing is what it seems. The woman is Michaela Fenton, an army veteran turned FBI agent trying to find her twin brother, who might be mixed up with some dangerous people. Most of them would rather die than betray their terrifying leader, who has burrowed his influence deep into the nearby border town, a backwater that has seen better days. The mysterious Dendoncker rules from the shadows, out of sight and under the radar, keeping his dealings in the dark. He would know the fate of Fenton’s brother. Reacher is good at finding people who don’t want to be found, so he offers to help, despite feeling that Fenton is keeping secrets of her own. But a life hangs in the balance. Maybe more than one. But to bring Dendoncker down will be the riskiest job of Reacher's life. Failure is not an option, because in this kind of game, the loser is always better off dead.

Better than the previous Child brothers collaboration, but the ending made no sense.
Reacher talks a lot less, but. there. were. too. many. short. sentences.

When Lee Child starting writing the Reacher books with his brother Andrew, it seemed clear he was looking to retire with his millions and let his brother take over the family business. It's not going so well. The last book, The Sentinel, was mediocre, but in this one Lee has ceded more control to Andrew, and the results are distinctly inferior. More a sterile techno-thriller than a Reacher novel, this one has him using mobile phones, working with the government and generally doing Bond-like things. The plot is very convoluted and the detail serves to slow and dull the suspense and tension rather than ratchet it up. The surrounding characters are cardboard cutouts; the novel is empty of personality and I was barely able to finish it. Sad to say, but this series appears to have run out of gas, and the driver doesn't seem to know where the service station is.

This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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WHAT'S BETTER OFF DEAD ABOUT?
Continuing the westward journey he started back in Past Tense, Reacher finds himself about as close to the US/Mexican border as you can get in one of the smallest towns we've seen him in.

He encounters an Army vet hunting for her twin—who has gotten himself mixed up with some sort of smuggling operation—that might be getting into something more serious. Michaela Fenton gets Reacher to help out with a scheme to put her face-to-face with the head of the operation.

Things go south, and before you know it, it's Reacher against this shadowy organization trying to save the Fenton twins and put an end to a plot that's either an act of political protest or deadly attack (Reacher's assuming the latter).

That doesn't make a lot of sense—but trust me, something as convoluted as this plot doesn't make it easy to summarize in a coherent fashion.

SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT BETTER OFF DEAD?
I strongly considered listing all my problems with this—but why bother? Venting my spleen might make me feel better, but I don't want to spend the energy on it.

Let me try to be concise—it was a giant, implausible, mess. The original plan that Reacher and Fenton come up with to take down the bad guy makes every single machine that Rube Goldberg drew seem efficient and straightforward. I couldn't believe that Reacher would sign on to it—and even after he started voicing concerns, he still went along with it. Reacher's known for his brawn, but his brain has always been—up to this point, anyway–just as important (if not more so). This was just dumb.

I was annoyed very early on, texting a friend, “Worst.Reacher.Ever.” Although I noted that the Child brothers had 250 or so pages to make me change my mind. I really wanted them to. But man, those short stories about pre-teen/teenager Reacher in New York City or Okinawa look really good to me now.

The least troublesome part for me was the voice—Lee Child tended toward the third-person, but occasionally used first to great effect. This time, first-person didn't help matter—and while I haven't read any readers complain about it, a lot of what I have seen people complain about I think would've worked if it was in the third-person (and/or wouldn't have been part of a third-person narration).

There were some good scenes, a handful of chapters that worked for me, in fact.* But they were a distinct minority. Still, in trying to be fair, I'd say if this was a thriller by a relative newcomer? I'd be more positive about it (not much more, but more). But Andrew Child (née Grant) has a dozen novels under his belt and Lee Child has twice that—also this is a Jack Reacher novel. There are standards that must be upheld.

*I'd planned on talking about some of those, but this post is longer than I'd intended it to be already, so let's leave it at “the whole thing wasn't a dumpster fire.”

I knew that there's be some growing pains as Lee backed off to let Andrew take over, but this was worse than that. The Sentinel wasn't perfect, but it was something to work from. Better Off Dead was a major setback and will take some work to recover from. Sadly, I bet that no one's going to make Andrew buckle down and do that work (please, please, someone prove me wrong).

I walked away from the interview I heard with them a few weeks ago with the impression that Andrew doesn't typically work with the “no outline” approach of Lee—maybe if he didn't try to ape that style, he'd be better off. There were a few times in my notes I wondered if they'd changed their minds about where the plot was going.

Give this one a pass—go back and read/reread 61 Hours, Nothing to Lose, Personal, or...you know what? Anything from The Midnight Line or earlier. It'll be time better spent.