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I loved the premise of this book. The blurb seemed right up my alley, and I did enjoy the overall themes and plot, and the representation of bisexual characters.
Unfortunately, the writing style itself really didn't work for me. It was written in a weird combo of first person (the protagonist) and third person (to give backstory on anyone else.) I'm struggling to articulate why this came across so strangely, so bear with me. The third person sections of the book read like an omnipresent narrator, but they were presented as if our protagonist was giving us information on these people in her lives. It just... didn't really feel like it made any sense, since she wouldn't know half the stuff that was being narrated to us? Even if all these people relayed these stories to her, they wouldn't do so in the exacting detail we see in the text. It just took me out of the story entirely, instead of being engrossed I was very, very aware that I was reading a book.
I also found the protagonist kind of one dimensional? She didn't really seem to have much in the way of thoughts or feelings, we were following along her life with her in her head but all we really saw was what happened, barely anything of what it actually made her feel. I felt like she didn't really have a personality.
Overall, interesting premise but executed poorly for me.
Thanks to the publisher and netgalley for the ARC