Death Becomes Her

This is just... not good. I realize it is a set up for a much larger universe. But I don't see myself engaging in this universe anymore than I already have.

First off, the writing is incredibly amateur. This reads like some lesser quality online fan fiction. I can tell there is the germinal core of an interesting story. But I can't get past the poor grammar, the sloppy descriptions, and the ignoring or hand waving away any of the potentially more interesting points.

Also, it seems that the author thinks he is writing a “powerful, independent, liberated” main female character. So why is it that every description of her starts with how darn hot she is? And the one physical characteristic that changes when she becomes alien super vampire is her legs are longer and even more attractive? Let's see, we'll make her flawed by making her short, then sex her up by making her taller and her legs even more attractive? This is the sort of pandering in the guise of empowering that drives me up the wall. Let's make the characters interesting because of who they are, not because they rip people apart and look super hot while doing it. Groan.

At least it was a fast and easy read. Not totally worthless, but I would NOT recommend this to anyone I liked.