Fine Print, Volume 1

I don't even know how to rate this or review it. The artwork is fantastic, the actual people and what the author considers attractive is lacking; the storytelling is disjointed.

There were just parts of the story line that was disjointed. We get unfinished thoughts and then have to surmise what actually took place between one panel and the other. In fact, it wasn't until I read the author's summary in the end that I figured out what happened to the succubi that was assigned to the Ace individual. I thought they died or something because they didn't complete the assignment but no. It turns out he became the roommate to the Ace individual. I think I would have liked to see more of that play out.

I didn't find the story telling boring but more so where is this all going because it was hard to follow the disjointed parts so that you could be like “ah ok. I get it.”

Not sure if I will continue.