Ratings29
Average rating3.4
@ the first read:
★★☆☆☆
@ the second re-read:
★☆☆☆☆
...... what the hell is this?
I love all things Harry Potter, and my only complaint is that this was too short. I needed more!
4/10
This might be a fine intro to the first chapter of an actual story but it feels pretty worthless standalone
This was way too short. I wish it were longer. I want to know more about what they were up to. Who were the people on broomsticks? How did the police explain the damage to their patrol car?