Heartsong

Reasons why Frey is an absolute catch.

He is happy about the little things

“He was alive and awake, his belly full of warm, real food, and he sat across from his heartsong. If only she'd stop scowling at him.”

He has determination

“He didn't need the intricate machines littering her kitchen; just a fire and a will to please.”

He will help in the household

“Somewhere through the days, Frey had changed tactics—and his hunky househusband routine was...working.”

He is smart

Frey was a proud male, but smart males knew when to bend. And when to beg.

He is eager to learn

“She wasn't surprised when he fell down the World War II rabbit hole his second night. He was unimpressed with her lack of knowledge about the merits of different fighter jets.”

He is inexplicably funny.

“Chewing her cheek, she turned back into the apartment, only to find Frey already a step outside her bedroom door, angrily chewing the last of his steak and inexplicably clutching one of her bras.”

Arc Reader Review


“Heartsong” stands out as a remarkable entry in the realm of spicy fantasy, especially for readers who are drawn to tales set in a world that mirrors our own, yet is steeped in magic and mystique. The book carves a niche for itself by blending the familiar with the fantastical, creating a setting that is at once recognizable and enchantingly novel. This unique backdrop serves as the stage for a story that promises to captivate and entertain, with its rich narrative and vividly drawn characters.



However, despite its many strengths, “Heartsong” is not without its flaws, particularly when viewed through the lens of its position within a series. It appears to suffer from a phenomenon often referred to as “second book syndrome.” This term describes a situation where a sequel struggles to live up to the expectations set by its predecessor, either in terms of plot development, character growth, or emotional impact. In the case of “Heartsong,” this manifests in a couple of notable ways.



Firstly, the plot twists, which are a critical element of any fantasy story, tend to be somewhat predictable. One of the joys of reading fantasy is the ability to be surprised and delighted by the twists and turns of the plot, to feel the thrill of the unexpected as the story unfolds. Unfortunately, “Heartsong” falls a bit short in this regard. The plot moves in directions that seasoned readers of the genre might easily anticipate, which can diminish the sense of wonder and excitement that is so crucial to the fantasy reading experience.


Secondly, the development of the love story between the two main characters lacks the depth and intensity found in the series' initial offering. Romantic development can be a driving force in a story, providing emotional resonance and helping to invest the reader in the characters' journeys. In “Heartsong,” however, this aspect feels muted. The chemistry and dynamic tension that spark to life in the series' first book seem less pronounced here, making the relationship feel somewhat flat and underdeveloped by comparison. This is particularly disappointing given the potential for exploring the complexities of love in a setting where the ordinary and the extraordinary collide.



In conclusion, while “Heartsong” is a commendable work that adds much to the landscape of modern fantasy, it is not without its challenges. The issues of predictability and muted romantic development are significant, detracting from the overall impact of the story. However, these shortcomings should not detract from the book's achievements, including its imaginative setting and the broader contributions it makes to the series. Readers who are able to look past these flaws will still find much to enjoy in “Heartsong,” from its engaging world-building to the ongoing development of its characters. As with any series, the journey is as important as any single installment, and “Heartsong” remains an important step in a larger, captivating narrative.