No Expectation of Returns

That was really good, but where's the rest? I don't want it to end, especially not so abruptly!

Not much to say about this one. Love the characters, love the writing style, love that this was a bit less daunting than the massive works in the overarching continuity. Frankly, I just overall love it. The flow to the writing was perfect and I adored the connection between Gabe and Stephen; it felt very solid and believable.

Not so wild about the amount of drinking involved with one of the important relationship developments, but then I'm also one of those people who internally winces even if there's only one beer involved for stuff like that. It's a me problem and the scene was handled well enough I didn't leave it with the nasty feeling I normally have when these things occur.

Also wish it didn't end so abruptly, for both the hockey aspect and the relationship's development. This feels like there are a couple ending chapters missing or something! And that's sad, because I'd happily chow down on a dozen more if only they existed.

Still loved what's there, though.