Really enjoyed this one. Premise was cool. Relationship development was twisted but solid. I cried in the end.
Negatives include a few really noticeable typos. Excessive torture scenes followed by forgiveness/sympathy for those committing the torture. A need to exact revenge on those that hurt you to cope with the trauma. A lack of clarity around numbers (so many big battles in a tiny wizarding population?) and focus on other significant losses outside of the main couple (i.e. Luna?!).
