The Fall That Kills

I understand, because of the short length, that the angst couldn't have been dragged out for too long but I do wish it had been. What Rayne did to her in such little time was bad, but I found Emma's reaction to be just slightly dramatic and because of that it was hard to take the story seriously. Rayne worked hard to redeem himself and I actually quite liked him, he was very sweet when he wasn't being vengeful.