The Longest Autumn

The Longest Autumn starts promisingly with engaging court intrigue, a creative magic system, and a budding romance. However, the plot soon loses momentum, meandering without direction and slowing down significantly. The characters, frustratingly passive, struggle to solve the central mystery, often relying on chance rather than taking initiative. The romance subplot is flat and uninspiring. After a slow narrative, the story concludes abruptly, resolving the mystery with little character involvement, leaving an unsatisfying ending. Despite strong world-building and a unique magic concept, the novel ultimately falters. The protagonist, hindered by severe headaches, is particularly passive. This book offers a glimpse into the author's potential, despite its shortcomings.
I am grateful for the advanced reader copy provided by the author.