The Quick and the Thread

I searched ???quirky cozy mystery??? and someone recommended this book. Sure enough, the first 10 pages dabbled in fun dialogue and silly analogies. After that, the author must have abandoned rewrites and editing because there were plenty of errors, typos, and sentences that were place holders for the next rewrite.

If this is how to start a 6 year 10 book series, then all of the aspiring writers out there have a chance for success.