When You Return

 I received an ARC copy of When You Return.

I struggled between a 3 star and a 4 star for this review. I loved the characters and story of When You Return, but I feel like they could've been better. A lot of plot points in the book felt underdeveloped or like the plot moved too quickly. When You Return could have greatly benefitted from slower pacing, or a higher page count.

What is in When You Return is done beautifully though! Isabella Ayubi creates a really compelling setting and some really fun characters. The FMC has her perspective on Good and Evil challenged, and the MMC has a really interesting power. After the results of the ending of When You Return I'm excited to see where the story is taken next.