Wings of Vengeance

This is just my personal opinion as an avid reader. I'll cover two points.

Point one: this story could be so much better with more editing. Three sets of errors glared at me.

Wrong use of words like sort when it should have been sought, loader when it should have been louder, through when it should have been threw to name just a few. Then there was the punctuation. Commas when they should have been full stops or question marks and vice versa between all three. Finally, not keeping track of the first/third person the story is being told in. I got the impression that the story might have originally been written in first person but changed to third. If that isn't the case then the author really needs to keep track of that.

Point two: despite what I said above, this is a good read and would have given 5 stars if it wasn't for those three sets of errors. I loved the characters. There was just enough info about them to make them intriguing and to individualise them from each other however, I was confused as to where the story was taking place. It seemed to be Brisbane Queensland Australia. Yet not, as some of the descriptions didn't seem to fit. Aside from that, an enjoyable story indeed.