Hillary
Needs much more actual Trump characterization... this character could have been any Joe Schmoe
3.49
•Interesting but feels rushed
•Needs more detail/depth!
•Some distracting grammatical issues
3.5
•First half dragged on
•Second half felt somewhat rushed
•Repetitive wording was a tad annoying and distracting
•Some characters and world-building could use more fleshing out
•Still not sure if I really care about Oraya
•Raihn is okay - not the best book boyfriend ever - but okay
Some of the stories were hard for me to follow, but many of them were very informative and eye-opening. Good cultural preparation for my study abroad trip.
4 but minus 0.25 for formatting issues like lack of quotation marks and loooooong paragraphs, as well as minor grammatical issues that made it feel like fanfiction at times
So 3.75
