There’s just too many characters introduced and too many names mentioned in the beginning of the story, so it kind of is hard to figure out what has happened until we’re way into the story. Then I gotta go back and reread the names to know what’s really going on. The story itself is alright.
There’s just too many characters introduced and too many names mentioned in the beginning of the story, so it kind of is hard to figure out what has happened until we’re way into the story. Then I gotta go back and reread the names to know what’s really going on. The story itself is alright.