Dead Man in a Ditch

★ ★ ★ 1/2 (rounded up)
This originally appeared at The Irresponsible Reader.
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WHAT'S DEAD MAN IN A DITCH ABOUT?
Fetch, Man for Hire, has two clients/cases this time out.

First, the police want his help—they have a corpse that appears to have been killed by magic. They're not broadcasting this idea, but that's the best theory they have. They figure this is more up Fetch's alley than theirs, they can't officially hire him, but they'll make sure that there's a solid reward ready for him if he can bring them answers.

The other case involves an older elf—her husband is missing, and is probably dead. She wants Fetch to figure out who killed him—even better, if Fetch can tell her why there are debt collectors from the wrong side of the tracks sniffing around...

There's not a lot of overlap in these cases, beyond the suggestion that there's still a little magic in the world, despite what everyone knows/assumes. Maybe this time Fetch will find the thing everyone wants.

TOO ON THE NOSE
There's a lot of material that's a commentary on the presence, use, and abuse of guns in the real world. Arnold was not subtle at all—I'm not saying he should've been, but it would've been a bit easier to take if he had. I really don't like authors taking a moment to do a PSA for whatever their cause is in the middle of a book.

Now, if they can work it in subtly? I don't mind, in fact, I'm frequently impressed by it (whether or not I agree with them). But this was a tad too blatant for me.

THE NARRATION
THere's got to be an advantage in narrating the audiobook for your own novel—you know how the strange names are pronounced already, you know exactly what tone is called for in each scene, and so on. On the other hand, you probably have to resist the impulse to do one more edit on each passage.

If you happen to be a pretty experienced actor, that has to be all the better.

Basically, I'm saying that Arnold is a perfect narrator for this and he did a bang-up job of it.

SO, WHAT DID I THINK ABOUT DEAD MAN IN A DITCH?
I thought I liked this novel more than the first in the series—I actually still do, but I'm rating this lower (I would like to ask 2020 me a couple of questions). Focusing on the present, even if the past looms large over the present, allows Fetch's cases to mean more and be developed in a better, fuller sense.

I'm intrigued by the direction that Fetch seemed to be headed at the end here (although, I kind of thought that's where he was headed already), but let's never mind that.

I loved Fetch's inner monologues, the voice is fantastic and I could listen/read it all day. I'm not quite as on board with the story—it's good, just slow. Still, I'm glad I listened to this, and expect most fantasy/PI fans will be, too—particularly if they're fans of both genres.

I'm just going to repeat what I said last time, because it still applies (maybe more than last time). Do I recommend this book? Oh yeah. You'll probably like it more than I did (I'm a little worried about hitting “publish” on this, as I know I'm one of the less enthusiastic readers of this). And even if you don't, you'll be just as impressed as I am with Arnold's imagination and skill.