In the Shadow of Lightning

I got an ARC and this is my honest review of it.

CAWPILE SCORE
C-9
A-8
W-8
P-9
I-9
L-9
E-10
TOTAL-8.86/10

Just an Amazing book. I loved every minute I was reading this book. I was pulling out my phone to read it anytime I had a spare 10 seconds. This was really great.

The Prologue and Epilogue were masterfully done, answering enough while asking the right questions, just great.

CAWPILE
Characters.
So many different characters, but it was easy to understand whose head you were in and what was happening. All the characters felt real and believable to me. Acting like real people would act. Having 4 characters to follow was great. Showing many different features

Atmosphere
The world is understandable, and easy to get lost in. You can tell that McClellan has spent some time figuring out how he wants this world set up. The way the city feels comes right off the page.

Writing
Not much I can say here. The writing was good. I never felt like it was clunky or using any “tricks” to get me to keep turning the page.

Plot
The Plot. Oh the plot. When starting out, I questioned how much was going to be about this or that. And how what the story was going to end on. Have no fear. Brian McClellan weaves his plot deftly around and through all the things you think and don't think are going to happen.

Investment
I was so excited by this book that like I said earlier I had a problem with putting it down. I was so invested in the characters, multiple characters just from the prologue. Then with the addition of other chapters my excitement grew by leaps and bounds.

Logic
I loved the magic system. A Medium style magic system if you will. Hard with just enough softness to cover its weakness. But you can understand enough and its explained enough that nothing feels surprising when it happens.... Well until the end.

Enjoyment
My enjoyment of this book is off the charts. I am so glad I read this. And I'm am super eagerly awaiting the next books in this series.

CAWPILECharacters.Demir Grappo, Baby Montego, Kizzae, Thessa, Idrian, Adriana, Capric, Aristanes.(Schemer), Thinking One. So Many amazingly great characters and such an interesting way they all work together or don't work together. Demir broken by Holikan on the road to recovery, finally done running away from his past. Baby Montego, I just can't get over actually calling somebody Baby in a book and not having it be weird, but it wasn't so it works. Kizzae and her Family issues. Because everything is about the FAMILY for the Ossans. With her working relationship with Demir. The betrayals that happen or happened in the past. Idrian the Breacher. Selling his life to keep his sanity. With a GodsGlass eye. Thessa a Brillant Glassblower (probably not the write term). I just loved all the interactions between all the charactersThe YUGLIDS excuse me what the heck are they and where are they from and what what what!!! I NEED to know more. Are they related to the monsters attacking the army. AtmosphereWritingLots of Chapters, but they are pretty short and go quickly. Uses the Chapters to generally signal character shift.PlotSo about halfway through the book I was thinking jeez, this war isn't working for anybody. All they are doing is destroying everything, turns out that was the plan, by the Glass Knife or the Schemer. I thought this was going to be about the Phoenix Channel and it was, and about finding the killer and it was, and leading an army and it was. And they were put together expertly so that as a reader you're not reading about things that have no interest to you. But they get revealed at the right times to make things exciting.InvestmentStarting the Sack of Holikan and the the Desperation that Demir feels so soon after a great victory, was so intense. I was invested in how Demir was going to come back and when, and what he'd been doing. Then learning about all our characters piece by piece and seeing them come together or apart, kept me very invested in learning what was going to happen to our characters.LogicThe Magic system. I love being told small things at the beginning so that we aren't as unaware and have to have things explained. Nobody would repeat to themselves what the magic does when its as familiar to them as some things are to us. The motives of the characters and the families was real and believable. I absolutely loved when Thessa learns that Demir is “responsible” for the Sack of Holikan and her parents deaths. She does leave him immediately but instead of learning the truth way later and regretting it, she seeks out someone she trusts and who knows what really happened and talks. Then immediately goes back to Demir and talks with him about it. Love it.Enjoyment10/10 loved every second of reading this bookMiscBaby Montego—I'll kill them. And then Killing the ANGRY ONEFear Glass Shackle GlassThe Prologue The Epilogue 2 Yuglids arguing.The Use of Wit GlassThe Glass Monster on top of the roof.Idrian stealing Cinderite and climbing a chimney.So much more
I will be talking about it on Libromancy https://libromancy.podbean.com/ on 07/27/2022

This book is unfortunately a DNF at 25%.

The deck was stacked against this book with all the people I know who also got approved for an eARC either not really enjoying it or DNFing. I cannot pretend that I exist in a vacuum where I wasn't aware of that, and it for sure had an impact on my reading experience. And I also didn't get very far, and nothing about the book struck me as bad or egregiously done, so I cannot say I do not recommend the book. Perhaps its great. Maybe in a while from now I will try this again and be head over heels. Unfortunately, though, the reality currently is that I have spent 14 days trying to read this book and failing. In 14 days I should finish any audiobook of this length. And I just kept stopping and doing something else. Nothing about the book was sucking me in.

The magic seems incredibly similar to Allomancy from Mistborn, but without the narrative giving you enough explanation of what each type of godglass does, at least early on. I'm told there is a list in the physical version, but in the audiobook I was mostly trying to assess why something mattered and what it did. The book is primarily a murder mystery/detective novel with some elements of rebellion in the background, but I did not care about any of it. The characters did nothing to stick out to me so far. Again, none of these elements were bad. They just weren't captivating for me personally, either. I've heard very mixed things about Powder Mage as well, and this book certainly has scared me off of McClellan for awhile, at least.

Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for a copy in exchange for an honest review.