Long Chills and Case Dough

A goofy little short story about a dame in distress, a man out of place in his own time, and a little bit of futuristic technology. I loved it for all its corniness, and appreciated the thought of a young Sanderson writing a college essay in this style. Short and sweet.

Long Chills and Case dough is a short story by Acclaimed writer Brandon Sanderson. This was surprise 5th story from the secret project kickstarter campaign that as far as I know no one was expecting. And for Sanderson it really is a short story at 68 pages long

Going in I knew this was a detective story, the cover of the book certainly gives that much away at least.

This short story gives the feel of a classic Dixon Hill setting (picards favorite detective holo program for the trekkies out there)

This was fun quirky and quick read about a Detective in 2151 investigating a crime with all the classic 1920s chicago mob private eye detective story. From the old building he works out of, to the lack of clients and the secretary who answers the phones and does some sluthing work for him. For a fun simple story the setting is just fine and no issues there, but that is where the good stops imho

I can see why this was not published in tradional or even self pub format. In the preface Sanderson states he wrote this story back in 2002 but did not publish it then or since as he has not found the right outlett to do so.

This book just does not, I guess age well in the modern Era. Derrins is a a extremley misogynistic and sexist character who has adopted the classic 1920s private detective way of speaking and culture. Often refering to his secretary as doll, skirt, etc.. and commenting that her job is to answer the phone and do her nails. At one point he is appears surprised that she is not just a secretary but a doll or skirt with brains.

Our main character is only called out once on his misogyny, and barley at that. It's just hard to believe that his mindset and way he thinks is acceptable in the setting of this book. There is nothing in this future world that suggesst that this is part of the overall culture of the society he is in.

I don't have a inherent problem with sexist characters in books, or racist of any other ist, When those characters are done well and it fits with the story in a effective way, but in this case Derrins sexisty misogyny is treated as no big deal, and the one time he is called out felt like nothing more than an attempt to call it out to say "see I called it bad"

If you are new to Sanderson do not read this book, at least not until you have read the rest of his works. This is not who Sanderson inherentley is as a writer, this is just a bad book or bad story overall, it only gets points for being a quirky fun little story but otherwise just not what I would call a good story

Als een laatste dankjewel ontvingen alle ondersteuners van de Secret Projects-campagne op Kickstarter aan het einde van het “Jaar van Sanderson” een e-boek voor een niet eerder gepubliceerd kortverhaal. Het kan trouwen voor iedereen ook gratis hier gelezen worden!

Long Chills and Case Dough is een verhaal dat Sanderson schreef voordat hij ooit werd gepubliceerd. Het is zijn experiment met het noir-detectivegenre.
Ik had wat moeite om hier mijn draai in te vinden. De schrijfstijl is erg hardhandig, vol met jargon en noir-gimmicks. Het voelde enorm overdreven en bijna als een parodie. Het verhaal zelf was echter best leuk en op een gegeven moment kwam de klik waarom het taalgebruik zo overdreven is, waardoor het opeens veel verteerbaarder en leuker werd.

Geen hoogvlieger, maar plezant en een heel fijne verrassing voor de fans.

Great for a free short story that you can read in a few hours. It's not an epic fantasy novel or anything but it's not supposed to be and it does everything it sets out to do with great effect. It's funny and the characters have a surprising amount of depth despite the main character purposefully making them seem flat through his perspective.

I love me some good Noir, and this short story parody hit the spot.

Loved the lingo, loved the setting of a 40's detective out of his time and the story was quick and to the point.

Would love to see this character fleshed out and turned into a more full length mystery.

Look, is this short story high art? No. Is it one of Sanderson's best? Definitely not.

But it was a hoot. It might be the funniest overall story I have ever read from Sanderson, but only because it's so ridiculous that you have to laugh. A detective in the future that yearns for the days of the 1930s so he talks as if he's in that era. Just goofy, amusing fun that you can read in one sitting.

Retroactively makes me likes Frugal Wizard even less, because Sanderson wrote this story 20 years ago and it was more impactful