Pelquin's Comet
Pelquin's Comet
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2 primary booksThe Dark Angels is a 2-book series with 2 primary works first released in 2012 with contributions by Ian Whates and Z. Allora.
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Ok, so I knew this was advertised as the first in a series, but I did not expect that even as I was reading I would be so aware of plot points which I knew were not going to be answered within the book. There is an awful lot of setting things up for later books which is something I dislike immensely and against which I react by refusing to buy anymore in the series.
It was decently written, if not exactly groundbreaking.
The universe created seemed somewhat strange - for instance, faster than light travel but cars with squealing tyres?
The book needs more proof-reading, with grammatical/typo errors and, more annoyingly, several references to actions or words by character A when it meant character B.