The Eagle's Nest

I enjoyed this fic mostly. I found the writing quality improved as the story went on. I also enjoyed the Theo character twist as interesting and unexpected. I didn't see it coming. I also liked the sex magic concepts and was so interested in exploring this element of magic in this universe. 

Unfortunately, the story was limited (or prolonged) by both character's holding staunchly to purity values of waiting to have sex until marriage. And, even after marriage, continuing to have views about having sex for ‘proper' purposes. I would have preferred a fic that challenges and changes these views rather than one that conforms to them.