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Rating: 2.63 leaves out of 5-Characters: 2.5/5 -Cover: 4/5-Story: 2/5-Writing: 2/5Genre: Horror, Fantasy, Paranormal, Feminism-Fantasy: 4/5-Horror: 1/5-Paranormal: 3/5-Feminism: 2.5/5Type: AudiobookWorth?: MehHated Disliked Meh It Was Okay Liked LovedAnother booktok book bites the dust. Honestly, the story could have been better if it were longer and things were fleshed out. It could have made up for how unlikeable the MC was. I would have loved more about the entity (I don't want to spoil) and what it did and would do. I just wanted more and I didn't get that.The horror was only at the beginning, honestly. Perfect scene. I know V took inspo from The Craft but I think it slightly missed the mark.
It took me a while to think of how to express my thoughts on this. What I've come to decide is that this novella feels like it was rushed to publication. The premise was good. I really enjoyed the writing. I really enjoyed what little I knew of the characters. The plot was pretty engaging. But it just felt so incomplete. We needed more of Fernanda's day to day stuff to get to know her. We needed Father Moreno developed more. We needed more mythology. What about the adults? What about Ruben? Some of the plot points kind of petered out or came in and out of existence. Much of the dialogue could have been given a second look. So yeah, I think a little more care could have brought this way higher up.