Within These Wicked Walls

CW: bleeding walls, parental abuse, dismemberment, selling of children

Probably more of a 3.5 but I'm rounding up.

I can't say I remember reading the original Jane Eyre but I have read a couple of retellings/stories inspired by the classic, so when I saw one more retelling announcement set in Ethiopia, I was immediately intrigued and very glad when I got the advance copy.

One thing I can say, this is perfect to read during this spooky season. The castle in the novel and it's owner are haunted by the antagonist, an Evil Eye which manifests in different forms throughout the castle every night, endangering its inhabitants. The author describes this eerie castle perfectly, with its many eccentric and sometimes horrifying features, which makes the building itself feel like the main character. That's what makes this a very intriguing gothic fantasy. The plotting is also pretty fast paced, with everything moving at breakneck speeds at times, because everyone's lives are in danger. The prose is pretty easy to read and I found myself quite engaged in this mysterious story.

Andromeda or Andi is a compassionate, brave, slightly distrustful but very loving young woman who has been through a lot of hardships since childhood, and is determined to finish this dangerous job and earn a patronage. Magnus on the other hand is the owner of the castle who has been plagued by the Evil Eye for three years and is very depressed about it. He is also a slightly pretentious and snobby rich brat sometimes, but his bad qualities get offset by his charm and wit. Their romance is definitely very instalovey but it was also understandable because they are two people who have experienced a lot of loneliness, and it's easy to fall in love with the first person who shows some affection.

There are quite a few side characters too but I didn't find any of them too memorable except for Saba who was sweet and extremely loving and caring, despite her devastating circumstances. And ofcourse there's Jember, the only father Andi has ever known. They have a complicated relationship and I understand why she was quick to forgive him when he apologized after 14 years of being abusive to her. But her justification that all his abuse was ok because he was doing it out of love and to help her survive, and all his abusive teachings helped her survive when she was literally homeless and starving (because of him) - was a bit too much for me to stomach and I almost felt like she was gaslighting herself. Magnus seemed like the only voice of reason who understood abuse for what it was.

In the end, this was a very eerie, mysterious, atmospheric and sometimes horrific YA gothic fantasy novel, with very memorable main protagonists and their endearing love story. I may have some issues with some characterizations but overall it was an engaging book, and while it doesn't have too much in common with the OG Jane Eyre except some names and the haunted castle, I still think fans of the classic will enjoy this one.

This must be the laziest “Ethiopian inspired” Jane Eyre “retelling” ever.
The world building is nonexistent, the characters are one-dimensional and contradictory, the plot makes no sense, it has insta-love, no magic system and no conflict. Also, so much artificial DRAMA!

The beginning was fun because Magnus and Andi had some nice banter but this book is a first draft at best, not a finished novel.

Also, keep your Catholic preachiness out of my YA, thank you.

The description of a fantasy Jane Eyre retelling is accurate. You can see the bones of Jane Eyre with some fabulous additions. I really loved the way that the female characters are given more agency and power in this story. The parental tragedies of Jane Eyre are there, but there is a little more hope infused in there. I loved the horror parts with the Manifestations. There is not a total answer wrapped up in a bow, which leaves me thinking about the story. The twist was a surprise that I didn't see coming, but is perfect. This is a fabulous book,

I picked it up because I was intrigued by the exorcist aspect plus a possible romance. I DNF'd at only 8% which is sad. It's not that the book isn't good either. I'm giving it 3 stars more because I think other people will like it but it wasn't for me. The book was just a bit of a downer. I'm sure it gets better as you keep going but where I left off our protagonist has just escaped a rough life on the streets, and a former abusive mentor who kicked her out and now she is in a haunted mansion that has a mean staff and distant (possibly crazy) employer. It's written well and has a POC protagonist but it's just not what I was looking for.